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Hey everybody,

If you're reading this, I assume that you read my story "First There Was Nature". If you haven't read the story, then I don't really understand why you're here, but you ought to read my story HERE. It's the last story on the first page, and it continues on the second page. Sorry if it's too long for people, but in the reality of the story, the events that take place only span the time of about 2 hours so that's not too bad when you think of it in that respect.

Some may ask where I got the idea from, and what the inspiration was, and in all honesty the story idea just came to me when I saw the contest, and I put my writing skills to work. All in all, I feel that the basic plot idea has probably, been done before, but like any other story under the sun it's my content and writing style that separates it from the myriad of others remotely similar. In the end I'm quite happy with the finished product. My only grievance is that I know some 13 year old kid is going to masturbate to a certain part in this story.

While I'm at this I'd like to shoot out a request to any artists that may be reading. If you would be so inclined (pulling out the fancy talk) I would love to see somebody's visual interpretation of my story, particularly the part where Amy has mutilated herself and is holding a knife, as I feel that scene would be a) the coolest and b) the one which would visually create an effect.

I've got nothing to give any artist if you do this, but my satisfaction. You could always submit it for Robot day though.

As a last note, feed back or criticism are appreciated. Just if you're going to critique, please leave your Siskel and Ebert acid tongues in your pockets, and be gentle!

Thanks for reading!

-Kevin